I. Love. This video.
Check it out. Just thought I’d share it.
Now, don’t get me wrong. I don’t think that the world needs Coca-Cola, and I don’ think that a bottle of pop will solve all our problems, make peace, and make us throw away our guns, knives, bombs and swords. BUT…It’s a nice video, and a real nice song.
As far as Nanoing goes, I’ve got 6,628 words going so far…Crazy talk y’all!
The story has a hard time staying focused. My characters are okay…meh…My MC Weslie is pretty well-developed. I mean, I can visualize him somewhat. Which is a step in the right direction.
Miranda could be better carved-out.
Mr. Dumas is mysterious…actually, he is one of the more complex characters.